It’s time for me to close my eyes
the sleep – she calls me in
tempting me with promises
of dreams from deep within
Happy to drown in fluid darkness
my lungs relaxed and full
spiralling soft, my body jumps
but still I feel the pull
And so I slumber deep and long
my dreams are all but lost
as I pull myself up from this sleep
to be chilled by morning’s frost
My bed, it lies like a crumpled body
it’s death, by noose, my sheets
I pull on my jeans, headphones on
and head into the streets
The bus stop frozen from icy glares
the wind a second best
We glide and jerk through glistening streets
I know I’m not a guest
My homework lies upon my lap
I want to turn around and go back home
Even my music has lost it’s colour
and bleeds into a drone
We fall out of the bus in an untidy crowd
the Subway reeks of cheese
I feel broken and somewhat heavy
Would they notice if I fell on my knees
My iPod turns into my lecturer
and continues in a monotonous tone
My brain has surpassed this walled in campus
I fall back into my cool dream zone
My liveliness is so inspired by friends of sweet love and sweet dreams
this shining light of laughing free
and left splitting at the seams
We say adiรณs and walk away
our paths cross again tomorrow
I find myself doubting myself
is this the path that I should follow?
I stand in the queue, the bus pulls up
we file in like a production line
stamped and paid and sit if you’re lucky
the sun’s shining and every thing’s fine
I walk briskly home, it’s getting dark
I walk in tune with a song
And wonder at ideologies like…
why can’t we all get along?
It’s warmer inside and my little friend
turns himself inside out to see me
I talk, I eat, I study hard just to go back
to be soft, warm and dreamy
ยฉ Kait King, 2015
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I can relate so much to this! I feel like this has been my life for the past 5 years and I am so glad that I am not alone out there so thanks for posting this.
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I can’t wait for my hard work to pay off only another year to go and then I shall be able to say that I did it and achieved what I wanted to xD
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A bacholers in Forensic Psychology ๐
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I hope so as I am mainly wanting to work within the mental health sector to help people through stressful times โค
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You will be challenged, confronted, rewarded, amazed and possibly even question yourself, which is a good thing๐ I’m excited for you and your amazing career ahead!! Only due to injury am I not working in the field, I loved every day. Helping people is the best work. Often while helping others to find themselves, you find your true self too โค
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A poem about our memories as students…. I like it. It’s beautiful.
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Interesting and poetic glimpse at student life. ๐
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Wonderful
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Reading this was just lovely ๐
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Please Keep it up. Love to read more.
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Lovely post! Was beautiful to read! โค๏ธ
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That was simply amazing!
I too tried to write something similar, would feel happy if you take a look at it๐
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Nice poem!
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I find happiness in it.
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Really a nice one!! The first two lines are very well written!
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This was gripping, held me captive during each sentence ๐ค
Despite a few urges to leave, the lure of the next sentence intrigued me too much.
Very nicely written, I love the style.
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This can easily be a song for uni students ๐
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Haha! I love it! What a great idea ๐๐
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Fluid all the way … ended perfectly … to be soft, warm and dreamy. Blissful, Kait.
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I love โHappy to drown in fluid darknessโโฆ.so true
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Haha!๐Thanks!
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โEven my music has lost itโs colour
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I have experienced this feeling before and never knew how to put it into words! So well described!
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You always touch me it doesn’t matter what you write.
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I just discovered your blog and absolutely love this. I just started my first year of university and relate to this immensely.
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Oh lovely to meet you and thank you! ๐๐ Enjoy every minute, it’s an incredible and privileged experience!
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I felt this deep in my soul.
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Nice blog , Thanks
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A poem for my current dystopia โ
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Nice poem. Keep up the good work
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Thank you and I most certainly will try to get by soon ๐
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Beautiful Memories
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Yes, very much so :), thank you
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A lifetime ago for me. Very glad to be where I am NOW.
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Hahaha! Yes – I went back as a “mature” student ( you gotta love it) ๐ – so only a few years ago which helped me be a part of the today uni student! ๐ I did love it though
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REMINDS ME OF SCHOOL!
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Hey – I’m good, thanks and yourself? ๐
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Not bad good day. Just sitting about now. X
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Nice poem
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Very nice indeed (:
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