He rolled her up in the carpet
He tied her up real tight
He threw her into the trunk of his car
And screeched out into the night
He knows he must not draw attention
He must slow down his breath and calm
He drove around for hours
With her body in the back of his car
Delusional or clear of mind
It really didn’t matter
He was clear enough to clean up the mess
And removed all her blood he splattered
He contemplated water
He thought about the dump
He thought about a mountain top
He could make it look like she jumped
As dawn approached, a screaming light
His stomach started to rumble
So he drove her through the drive thru
And didn’t miss a beat or fumble
A steady hand held out dollar bills
But his eyes he kept downcast
Not a thought spared for his wife in the trunk
The love that didn’t last
Β© Kait King, 2015
very well written π₯°ππ
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Thank you so much π π»
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That picture though, he just looks so happy
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I know, perfect, right!ππ The dastardly bastard….
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Yikes, Kait!π
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Haha!ππ
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Thrilling …. ππΌπ
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πthanks!πππ»
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Love this! Stephen King vibesππ»
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Haha! Love Stephen King too!ππ
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My god. Gave me chills
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Oh that’s awesome! I mean…well you know what I mean…Thank you!ππ
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Gave me goosebumps
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πExcellent!
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Wow
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That was chilling.
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Excellent lol!ππ
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I am stunned and a bit speechless. I am surprised I can write this much. π I do love reading your poems; very expressive and the feelings are strong within your words.
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πthank you very much! Just a crazy mind in print lol π
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I don’t know what to say.
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I don’t know where it comes from! Lol π
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Oh this is the best π±ππ
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Thank you!ππ
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Loved this
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Thanks! π
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What a lovely idea.
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Hahaha! I’m not quite sure how to answer that – it’s a lovely idea to….kill your partner? Get take-aways? Write about murder? π Please do elaborate….
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The drive-thru. Convenience.
I’m starving, π
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I should’ve known that lol π
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I like this one. Thanks for posting.
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Thank you for visiting π
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