Don’t you leave me
left behind
Don’t you cut me
out of your mind
Can’t you see you’re here all alone?
Can’t you hear your heart say
This is home?
Don’t you hurt me for ever more
Don’t you walk away
and leave it all
You can’t hold me like that
then let me go
There’s something more
that you don’t know…
© Kait King, 2015
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Oh ! Kait I really loved your writing
but did something happen that made you write this ..?
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I think life happened… love and falling in and out of it can get bumpy! Add marriage and children and the sense of betrayal and loss are greater, somehow. Thank you so much for reading and commenting Fatima!🙂🌻🙏
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Really enjoyed this
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Thank you 🙂🙏
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You’re welcome😊
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Can’t you hear your heart say
This is home?
I can’t begin to tell you how much I smiled at that line. Poetry is such a soul stirring thing. Love this piece. 🤗
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Thank you so much 🙏🙂🌻 and yes, words can cut but also heal, make you sad or smile. Their combination both elusive and determined…
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❣️
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🌻🙂🙏
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Thank you so kindly 🙂🙏 I will do my best!
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This resonates! Thank you!
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My pleasure, thank you!🙂🙏
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Every line bleeds love, hurt … cuts the heart.
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My bleeding heart!😔💔
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Strong, caring heart, Kait
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😊
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Well, that’s my impression and I’m sticking to it 😊
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You can feel cursed with a caring heart, I’m sure you know what I mean …
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Yes, of course. I’d rather be guilty and pained by an (over) caring heart than being a person unable to love …
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Absolutely! 🌻
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You have talent dear friend,nurture it and prosper!
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Loved this Kait, you seem to always have so much more to say than just the words you write.
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Awww thank you! That’s really cool 😊🙏
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True.
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🙏😊
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I think I fixed it, thank you for bringing that to my attention.
Here is the poem I was talking about:
http://www.dulceamargablog.com/2016/08/27/dear-old-self/
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No problem 🙂 Have visited and left a comment – I would’ve liked to press a like button but couldn’t find it?
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I just wrote a poem about letting go! Wow, this post is almost a reply to my poem… It’s good it makes me feel sad
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Oh how cool! 🙂 I will try to get over there to have a look – thanks 🙂
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Hey I can’t access your blog – maybe something in your settings to make visible to public? It says the site is ‘no longer available’ when I click your link…just fyi 🙂
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Hi there, just became alert to your blog through Google, and found that it is really informative. I am going to watch out for brussels. I¡¯ll be grateful if you continue this in future. Many people will be benefited from your writing. Cheers!
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Is it weird that I sang this in my head instead of reading it like I usually do other poems hmm. Loved it
https://starved4passion.wordpress.com/
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Awesome! I love that – and not weird at all! I’m glad it sang to you too 🙂
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It has a melodic quality to it. 👌
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Love this. So reblogging it
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Awesome and thank you! 🙂
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Well done on that post… check out my previous scribbles…
Regards:
James
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Thanks 🙂 will do!
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Hey James, have tried several times to access your blog but it says you are no longer available?? Just a heads up – not sure why!
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Try https://jamesmayorblogdotcom1.wordpress.com/ …..
Regards:
James
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Thanks – that was sooo much better 🙂
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It’s a pleasure having you on the platform.. CHECK OUT the site once in a while for more scribbles…
Regards:
James
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Thank you very much – I get so bogged down with my writing, it is always such a joy to read another’s inspiration – be that dark or light etc 🙂 Happy scribbles!
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This is great. I wish we could create a support group on here
https://unseentruthblog.wordpress.com/2015/08/29/just-being/
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…oh but you can…;) and thank you!
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nice!! i love it!
i hope you can drop by to my blog:
http://www.wisketofgem.wordpress.com
thanks! cheers! ♥
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Thank you very much and yes, I would love to 🙂
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There’s always something more that would change everything.
I love this 🙂
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So very true! And thank you :)!
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Reblogged this on William Chasterson.
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Reblogged this on ReachOutAndStandOut.
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Reblogged this on Do The ReBlog….
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I like your writing.
Why do you upload images with your text? Is there a particular reason?
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Hi, thanks 🙂 – I guess it’s just another form of expression or giving my words a little more impact? Or perhaps to give a little more insight into me and my perceptions? Also, I love cooking and I know that we eat with our eyes first, so it just seems like a logical progression to draw a persons’ eye to my writing as well. Thanks for asking and I hope this answers your questions 🙂
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“we eat with our eyes first” — WOW!
All those cooking shows…Fascinating.
We do taste and eat with our eyes!
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I think so 🙂 then our nose with smell and even in a tactile sense if we are holding the food, aurally if we can hear it sizzling or popping etc – our mouth is the last thing that is engaged… obviously 🙂 But interesting science and psychology behind food 🙂
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