A lisp
a whispered hiss
With a gristle hustle
and a deathly shuffle
you wind your way
back home
There’s a twist
and a freakish glow
in a freak show
the decaying beat
of a drum
hiss
a whispered kiss
of a driveling fool
your hunting days
are done
this
flayed lantern skins
bones used as tools
a soup bowl
not a soup bowl but
a human skull
© Kait King, 2015
A real life character perhaps “Poe” could’ve written into existence. The imagery from your piece compartmentalized the darkness of a full length documentary I’ve seen on him. I feel as though I’ve seen it again. How evil can a human being be? An important question to ask.
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Is there a limit? Terrible questions to ask but yes, very necessary. Oh that’s so cool – I saw my poem as a mini- movie😁 thanks!
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Probably isn’t a limit.
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😔sadly…
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Well written. You are an amazing writer
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You’re very kind, thank you!🙂🙏🌻
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Lady GAGA a charm..
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🙏🙂🌻
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I’m thinking you and Stephen King. Haha
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😂😂 Haha! I’m not surprised!!
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Sent you an email. SOS
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He’s the guy that Silence of the Lambs, the movie, was partially based on. Your poem captured his his deeds quite accurately.
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It is! And thank you 😊
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Various works within the horror genre have used characters with some basis on “Ed Gein”. Truly a disturbing monster.
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Isn’t he scary! Very mentally deranged😬
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Well written and intriguing. I want to know more! Thanks for sharing 🙂
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Haha! Thanks 😁 Yeah, he’s a super intriguing character alright! Eddie Gein is his name, a worthwhile Google if you’re interested ☺
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Will check him out 🙂
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Awesome article.
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Brilliant!
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Thank you! He’s such a fascinating character – seriously mentally ill, but seriously fascinating too 🙂
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💝💋💝💋
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Wow!
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Thanks?! I’m guessing…lol 🙂
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