With such confusion
I’m walking through a jungle
of desert
Holding
like a dam of emotion
my feelings –
when really I want to be
the river
rushing to meet and make
an ocean of you
Falling so crashingly in love
will it be a bad landing?
I draw our names
in the sand
and you carve your place
in my heart
© Kait King, 2015
The writer's blogk 
Gorgeous, Kait. Love it. ❤️
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Wow! You’ve got a talent for writing poems! This was my favourite part:
“ Falling so crashingly in love
will it be a bad landing?
I draw our names in the sand
and you carve your place in my heart”
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Oh thank you so much!🙂🙏🌻 Thank you for sharing your favorite part, I love that!🙌
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Wow! ❤️
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Thank you😊🙏
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You seem to be falling in love, all over, once again. I hope you are doing good in this era of lockdown and social distancing.
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😊 yes thank you…happily single actually and in total lockdown! I wrote this a few years ago 🙏😊
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Yes, you had told me your status earlier. But one doesn’t need another person to fall in love. 😁
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😂😂😂🌻
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!🙂🙏
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You write beautifully
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Thank you so kindly Irene 🙂🙏🌻
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So creative Kait.. Well written..
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Thank you!😊🙏
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Beautiful
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Thank you 🙏🙂
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Great work!
Makes me remember that sick feeling.
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Oh thank you!…. I think?!?! 😀lol! Sorry about the sick feeling!
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Brilliant writing, Kait, but I am biased being such a huge fan of yours xoxo
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Oh blessings to you my lovely Dave 🙂 thank you, thank you and thank you again xoxo
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You’re welcome, you’re welcome and you’re welcome once again xoxo 😉
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Your poetry is creative. Do you write it by yourself?
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Yes I do :)! Although I’m a Gemini so apparently I’m two people in one….;) lol
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Very good poetry.
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Hi, I posted the first chapter
Any advice on how I can make it shared on further or anything please
Your like the person I look up to right now because of how creative you really are…
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That’s really kind to say, thank you Harjit 🙂 I looked at Amazon publishing and Lulu, there are many self-publishing companies where you can promote your books 🙂
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Thank you:)
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You’re most welcome 🙂 best of luck and don’t stop writing!
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