It’s your speciality
how you play with me
with mind in motion
and bodies in ecstasy
Charged
Divine
your laugh trapped in time
Secretly you practice
your lines
A mirror glance
poison flows
those eyes watch with compare
assessing what you haven’t got
collapsing in despair
© Kait King, 2015
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Thanks for sharing 🌻
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Beautiful 💗
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🙏🙂🌻thanx!
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Welcome🥰
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Sooo beautiful! ❤
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I never tried writing poetry but enjoy reading yours. Makes me think more deeply.
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Thank you so much, that’s one of the reasons I share my crazy mind😁Perhaps you’ll be inspired to write poetry yourself🙂🌻🙏
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Despair & Ecstasy, swirling in and with each other. What a dreadful combination these are, yet how seamless you made it sound Kait. Kudos
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Thank you so kindly!
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Beautiful write-up!!
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Thank you so kindly!🌻
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Evocative and thought provoking poetry. What you do with writing is remarkably brilliant and you connect with us as readers to swim in your world of creativity.
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I am lost for words…thank you, Charliezero1!! Thank you….😊
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You’re welcome, Kait.
Your work is incredible.
Say, you haven’t stopped by in a while to read my latest poem I posted yesterday. Hope you stop by and read. 🙂
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I’m very humbled, thank you again😊 Oh I just have now!☺
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Nice 😊
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Thanks 🙂
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amazing…..
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😊
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Ohhh…
That was heart-wrenchingly beautiful. Utterly lovely beads of words.
Loved it! ❤
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Oh thank you so much 🙂
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You are most welcome. 🙂
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Wonderfully evocative, and so amazing! I’ve just finished reading about children with RAD (I think my grandson has something wrong in his DNA and I’m trying to figure out what it is). Then this poem comes up and says a lot to me too. Kait, you really are the most amazing perceptive and inspirational person I’ve never met. Thank you so much for helping without knowing you were. For being there for me when I need a friend and providing wonderful advice which you couldn’t have known was needed. My dearest friend and sister, may love and peace continue to emanate from you and may you always find the same from others. Love you so much as you always give without asking for anything in return. Long may our friendship last xoxo
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Oh Dave thank you! As I write what I do know from my heart, I just never know what those words will mean to someone else. I know timing has a massive impact on what certain things will mean to us and how we perceive or read them – but I’m just so grateful that my words found their way to you when you needed them 🙂 And what an awesome granddad you are to be searching for answers too!! Peace with answers, love and light – blessings my dear faraway friend. I laughed my arse off, by the way, when I read the ‘never met’ bit ….thought it was a typo initially hahahahaha! Love ya bro! Have a most beautiful time xoxo
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😎😍💝💋💝💋
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