Devil’s dancing
in your eyes
tonight my anger’s
turning
lust related
through your lies
and now my anger’s
burning
Trust deflated
a poor disguise
today my anger’s
hurting
Love forgotten
nowhere to hide
tomorrow my heart
is yearning
© Kait King, 2015
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Every word has been placed in the right place. Very nice lines. And also meaningful.
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Thank you so much, Ajim! I appreciate your feedback 🙏☮️🌻
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What an inspiring emotional line❤️❤️❤️..
Great expression🤝
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Bless you 🙏 ☮️💜
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You interpret feelings very nicely
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Thank you so much 🌻🙂
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So poignant – and right on. Been there, done that,
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Oh yes! One of the biggest ongoing dances I know of!
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Loved it. Nice flow
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Thank you!
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My pleasure
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Nice!!!
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Thanks 🙂
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Really good one
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Thank you 😊
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😀thank you!
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🙂 …
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From hate to love….beautiful keep dancing.
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Thank you! What a beautiful comment 🙂
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Beautiful! Your poem has such a nice flow, it was like reading lyrics to a song, I could swear I heard music playing as I read it.
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Oh thank you so much – what an awesome thing to say!! 🙂
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Thoroughly enjoyed reading this, as with all your poetry. Subtle but to the point xoxo
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Thank you! 🙂 xoxo
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Ooo! I loved the cadence in this. Nicely done.
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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I enjoyed this one! Brief to the point, yet shows the progression of the heart.
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Thank you Michael 🙂 glad you enjoyed it!
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Nice…..
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Thanks 🙂
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