If I say that I don’t love you
will it make you stay
for another day
And if I pretend
that I really don’t care
would you want me more in the end
But the truth be told,
I cannot tell a lie
all of you just drives me
crazy
And for your love
I would surely die
Will you meet me there in the end?
© Kait King, 2015
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Lots of Love 💌
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Beautiful written.
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Thank you 🌻
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Wao! What a lovely post. Yes dear and thank you very much!
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🙏🌻
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This is what is love is all about!
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It is, it’s compromise, coming together after the storms, being both there in the end…staying together🙂🌻
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Its truly hard pretending not to love someone when you’re crazy about them but if it’s the last option then do it. Great poem
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Thank you!🙂🌻 Yeah, awful not being able to love freely or be yourself …
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Obviously we can’t lie about love
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To everyone else maybe, but not to ourselves 🙏🙂
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this is nice I really like how it started If I say I dont love you will it make you stay. That makes me think of doing the opposite in a relationship since trying to do things right didnt work! this is wonderful, short and simple. Thanx
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Oh yes, good old reverse psychology!! I can’t say it’s the right thing to do but seeing as my love didn’t work, perhaps pretending to not love him might keep him hanging on. But that’s just living a lie and didn’t work either!! 😄🙏
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“And if I pretend
that I really don’t care”
Quite impressive
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Thank you very much 🙏🙂
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Welcome
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Lovely post my friend.
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Thank you Tony!🙂🙏
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Wooowwww…..!!!!!!! Loved it..
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Thank you very much 😀!! So glad you have enjoyed my words!
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I’d meet you anywhere and you know it’s true. Lover, not even that, nevertheless I do love you so my dear, Kait don’t you ever doubt that. You can lift me with your words, make me feel your pain and I want to help you through it all. xoxo
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Oh bless you Dave, and you do – so kindly and with love – I thank you 🙂 xoxo
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You’re very welcome my dearest friend, love always xoxo
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Heya Kait, loves blades cut deeply as much as its feathers carry you soaring…
To you “The woman with the smiling eyes”…I’m glad to have met you, and that our own weavings in this world would have us be in eachothers patterns always.
Arohanui ki a koe e te putiputi!
T
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Bless you T, much love and aroha to you – some people you know for a moment or a day or a lifetime – we will always be friends and I will always be somewhere there 🙂 Take care my friend and keep being beautiful 🙂
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I would like to meet you here in the end,lol
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lol 🙂 thanks!
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What about meeting you halfway?
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Hahaha! I think we’re already there….;)
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Awesome job, Kait!
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🙂 Thank you very much!
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https://mychildwithin.wordpress.com/2015/08/04/poetry-quote-challenge-day-2/
I have nominated you for this 3 day challenge.
I will look forward to seeing what you write about 🙂
(There is no obligation at all of course)
Best Wishes
🙂
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Awww thank you so much 🙂 I’m flattered! I wish I could accept but I must sadly and politely turn down your nomination 😦 I’m really sorry but I am inundated at the moment and hoping to release an anthology of poetry soon so that and my novels are just gobbling up my time! Thank you so much for thinking of me though 🙂
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Not a problem at all 🙂 Good luck with the release of your anthology. ❤
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Thank you so much, that’s very kind 🙂
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Another lovely piece.
Do you have a book out?
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Oh thank you! And funny you mention that… 🙂 I am hoping to release an anthology in the next two months! 🙂 Maybe less if I can get it put together quicker 🙂
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I’ll be waiting. 🙂
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😀
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oh my goodness!! This is so beautiful! Really is one of my favorite pieces.
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Oh thank you so very much! That’s fantastic 🙂
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You are so welcome!
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😀
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Wow that’s really good!
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Aww – thank you very much :)!
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yes lol
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