Carve the edges off your haunting pain
With time as sharp as a knife
the moments slide by in an agonizing grind
You’ll have this moment for the rest of your life
My feet sunk deep in a cement grip of permanence
a ball and chain of grief connects my soul to the earth
My bones and skin just vehicle remnants
My soul will have rebirth
© Kait King, 2015
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😂🙌
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My soul will have a rebirth 😻❤️.
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Yes!🥰🌻
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Very deep! I love it!
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🌻thank you!
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So lovely..
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🙏🙂thank you
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Again beautiful
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Aweosme!
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Thank you! ☺
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An arresting and brilliant piece of writing. In so few words you convey so much emotional depth. Thanks for your brilliant words.
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Awww, you’re too kind! 😊 Thank you for commenting xoxo
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Very well written. 🙂
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Thank you so much ☺
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Kait, Kait, Kait, how do you do it? How do you keep coming up with these wonderful expressions and leave us no room to wonder? Such a beautiful way with words my friend and I must add we love you for it. Please keep it going and share your pain and words with us, love and peace always my dear friend xoxo
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Awww thank you Dave 🙂 I do it just like all the rest of us out there – I just never seem to have room to read, only to write! Beautiful words my friend – thank you again 🙂 xoxo
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You write so well though my dear friend. Please keep on making us think, laugh, cry (sometimes), love and be scared in equal measure. You do it so well and so often xoxo
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You’ve made my day darling Dave 🙂 thank you – to evoke emotion is my absolute goal with writing – no matter what emotion that may be lol !:) Blessings and Love xoxo
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Emotions are necessary, I hate only hatred born of ignorance, as an emotion. Love and peace and days filled with joy, my dearest Kait xoxo
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Blessings to you my friend xoxo 🙂
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Thank you my dearest friend xoxo
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You do have a way with words, don’t you? Consider, “cement grip of permanence” and “ball and chain of grief” – the symbolism, the metaphors! Aaah! (An outburst of appreciation!)
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Well thank you so kindly! 🙂
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Gr8!! after reading your few poems ,it feels like that you are a professional poet..
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Wow – well thank you very much! 🙂
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