You’re bundled
into a car
you don’t know
where you are
You can hear the
indicator blinking
And it triggers your
panicky thinking
You try to count wildly
at something
Knowing ultimately
that this isn’t helping
trying to remember
the twists and bends
Wondering how on Earth
will this all end
© Kait King, 2015
❤️❤️❤️
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I am writing a kidnapping scene in my story and situation of my character is totally relatable
I loved reading this poem of yours ❤️
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That’s awesome! Thank you so much🙂🌻 I’m wishing you all the very best of success with your book🙏👏🙌
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Soo sweet
Thank you so much 💖
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Awesome
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Thank you 🙂🙏
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😊
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ooo scary!!
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😄😄🌻
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I absolutely love how quick yet impactful your writing is.
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Thank you so much! I can only hope so 🙏😄
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Love this, love your writing and love your page!!!❤️❤️
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I’m so delighted, thank you!🙂🙏
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Ends with one
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Possibly!🙂🙏
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Loved it! Great use of words!❤️
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Thank you kindly ☺
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The unexpected…Sure. 🙂
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😉😎
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You have a very beautiful website. I look forward to coming back and reading more. Please stop by mine and if you like, follow back.
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Sure – and thank you! 🙂
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As always, explore the darkness inside everyone. Who deserves empathy, victim or unsub? Well done Kait you excel at poetry to make us think feel and enjoy. Have a blessed week, spend your days with love in your heart and plenty of hugs and kisses to make the darkness fade. Xoxo
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Oh thank you Dave 🙂 I hope you’re having a great week too – the weekend is almost upon us! Thanxx for shining the light 🙂 xoxo
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👍💋💝💋💝
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I enjoy this in a veery dark way.
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Hahaha! :)….uh oh….;)
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Such a scary feeling…I definitely felt it.
Have a nice weekend:)
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Thanks love, 🙂 You too!
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I loved reading your poem. I was imagining myself in that situation while reading it. Well done
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Oh thank you very much! 🙂 that is great to hear!
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