So do you think it may annoy you
should I love you too much
That time would trap you
in a heartbeat
If I won’t give you up
Is it crazy to think
that you will only touch
my skin
stroke my hair
and let me in
Will it be overwhelming if I say
I love you every day
leave notes in your lunchbox
and always want you to stay
the night
the week
forever
Is it rude of me to want all of you
not a share, a percentage or a piece
but the everything and nothingness
of you
the very most
and
the very least
Β© Kait King, 2015
o man u r doing far beyond words ππ
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πthank you so much!
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Loved this one!β₯οΈπ
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Thank you!ππ»π
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Super lines there, Kait.
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Thank you so much!πππ»
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This writing melts my heart. So lovely!
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Thank you so muchπππ»
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Amazing is what I could come up with after reading your work .
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That’s very kind, thank you!πππ»
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Very nice
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Thank you πππ»
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Brings me back to elementary school, very nice!
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Yes, that desperate love!ππ
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Damn. This spoke to my heart π Amazing work as always.
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Thank you so much π
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Love! β€οΈ
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:)) Thank you!
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leaving notes in the lunchbox…. such a pure old act of love… sweet poem!
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Thank you :)! I’m a hopeless romantic at heart I think π
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Wonderful as always, Kait, that’s why I love coming here.
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Always a pleasure to have you visit Dave, many many thank you’s!
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I love your writing so it’s always a pleasure to visit.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you! π
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