It’s like
an unsticky web
how things
fall into my
head
Nothing ever
really gets
filtered out
Thoughts are
thrown at me
in a shout
Yeah, it is
pretty clear
something’s going
on here
Each inky
black thought
casting
immeasurable doubt
It even surprises
me
with the words
that I spout
Who wrote
those things?
Evil awful
creepings
Friends ask
Where on Earth
did you find
this out?
Why would
you write such
horrid things?
It gives pause
for thought
and doubt
© Kait King, 2016
Evil awful creepings. Love it. Yes. Yes every day. Particularly when it’s 2 am. Those are the creepiest creepings.
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Yes they are! Thank you for commenting 🙂🌻
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Love this one.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Love the way it’s written ♥️
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Thank you so much!🙂🙏
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Well penned !! Read it twice
Do read review and follow my blog.Your reviews are valuable
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I have! Thank you!🙏🙂
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Love this💞
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Thank you 🙂🌻
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Very nice.
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Thank you 🙏🙂
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Lovely expression 😊
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Thank you 🙏🙂
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Amazing
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Thank you kindly 🙂🙏
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I can’t say
My thoughts loud
Screaming mind
My crying Soul
My Frozen heart
Bleeding Wounds
Words Smell Night
And Light of Moon
Screening my Mind
Messy And howls
Like a Wolf on a Far off Land
Saying it’s Heart Loud
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I love your writing… it’s great…😍😍😊😉😊
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😊thank you!🙏
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Nice word pictures.
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Thank you 🙏
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Gotta love how when you’re raw in your words then you’re considered defective.
Who made this rule that we have to conform to the herd?
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I know!! I like to be a bit of a rebel so…fuckit 😂😂 Never Surrender!!
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Right on!!!
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😉😁
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This is woww! Please read and review thia post https://aishwarya236.wordpress.com/2018/01/21/mute-talks/
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Thank you! I shall 🙂
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Interesting descriptors and flawless rhymes! You’re so creative!
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Thank you so much, you are too kind! 🙂
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Friends make life easier and give us memorable moments. Please read this post about the same: https://columntribe.wordpress.com/2017/10/23/a-break-from-everyday/
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They certainly are…and thank you 🙂
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Hey! Love your blog x
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I really enjoyed the flow of this composition– the rhyming words and the structure felt, to me, as if the words themselves were threading the web. This entry was amazing. 🙂
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Oh thank you so very much! 🙂
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Fab
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cheers! 🙂
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i love it!
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THANKS Kait.
This click through link worked too!
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Yippeeee!! 😀
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Thank you! ☺
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Wonderfully written and sculptured.
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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We love you Kait so keep letting those words out xoxo
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Blessings to you and thank Dog because I can’t help it! Lol 😊xoxo
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Interesting post; all those thoughts. I think it’s the law enforcement energetics, having spent 14 years in that world myself. We just don’t have the same thoughts as the rest of the universe 😉
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Hahaha! I think you might be spot on there 🙂 It’s definitely a job that will change your perspective on life – or at least what you “thought” life is/was all about!
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I have found it amazing how many don’t appreciate my blurting of words. Some of them just can’t accept it when we speak the truth with the words we spout. Keep spouting them Kait… So many of us love it when you give us pause for thought and doubt.
I hope many beautiful moments crawl through that unsticky web…
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Hahaha! Oh thank you Michael – and for you too, from one wordblurter to another 😉 I appreciate your words, fyi – I hardly get around but love getting around to your site!
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Stay true to yourself and you will inspire, intrigue and capture all those followers. Don’t let the minority dissenters become the driver for questioning your approach. You are an excellent writer – stay with it!
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Thank you! I needed that 🙂 Blessings, love and light to you and yours 🙂
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