She’s listing
dangerously –
hair unwashed
no make-up on,
even the Captain
abandoned her
uninteresting,
over-weight and
needy
Stuck in the
iceberg
solid
icy
cold
unwanted connection –
The dark will soon
be upon the wreck
alone
lonely
lost
In the dark
© Kait King, 2016
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Very clever. ❤️ love it
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Thank you 🙂🌻
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I love this! ❤
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Thank you!🙂🙏
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Brilliantly funny! and such an amazing write.
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I love this! Too funny, I just wrote about Rose being stupid in the movie! Beautiful poem; I’m glad I saw this today!
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Awesome! I’m glad too! ☺
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This is so beautiful.
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Oh thank you so much 🙂
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Heya Kait..ataahua. the zen of more being less. .artful my friend. Cuppa soon eh!! 🙂
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Hey thanks luv 🙂 and yes, waaaaay overdue!
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I love this so much Kait. We have a special affinity for Titanic history into family. 💙
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Thank you! OoOOooo …pray do tell! That sounds intriguing!
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