If I could cut out your
heart
This is how it would
feel
And the music will tell
you
How come it’s so
real
If I could cry with your
eyes
This is how it would
feel
And the words that I
sing
Is how come it’s so
real
© Kait King, 2015
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This is ironically musical 😦
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I know – weird huh? Always sounds like that to me too
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It’s so good 🙂
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I keep learning more from you ..keep up the good work
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Awww, thank you so much – as long as they are good lessons and help you in life!🙏😊🌻
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Those words means a lot . Keep writing dear
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Thank you very much 🙂🌻
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Wow❤
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🌻🙏🙂
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The starting was so captivating!!!
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Thanks🙂🙏🌻
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Beautiful❤️
Great Writing ✨
Please Check out and follow my site about Love.
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What a powerful start
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Thanks
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I love those very first lines, the whole thing is great but those first lines are amazing
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Thank you so much!🙂🙏
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Yeah, that’s what I thought… I saw them and was like, whoa, this is raw! Well done
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😊🙏
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Like the imagery you provoke in your raw poem.
I would imagination how ripping a heart out would feel.
And your right the music feels intense in a metaphorical sense of ripping someone’s heart out.
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That is very deep Charlie, I’m never sure if I explain myself well enough!! 🤔🙂
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I could stay here all day great poem, please check out mine and tell me what you think.
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Thank you and yes, I will do my best to get over there soon! 🙂
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Thanks
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Hey I can’t access your site…it says it is deleted?
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Sorry about that here is the link
https://starved4passion.wordpress.com/
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Awesome – thanks 🙂
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Can you read my poem and tell how you find it? I’m new here 😦
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For sure 🙂
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Waiting for your review 🙂
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Done! Sorry for the delay – just released final chapter of a book and publishing to Amazon so hectic with formatting and finalising and book covers etc! 🙂
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Good luck 😊
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Thank you! 🙂 scary!
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Thank you, (smile) scary!! [Maybe I read/understood it wrong.]
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I was thanking the person who said “good luck” re my publishing my book and smiling – but it is a scary thing to do this for the first time as a writer …I reckon you need some WP or Hipster skills here my friend lol 🙂 (lol = Laugh Out Loud)
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It’s as if words have come alive with this poem. Beautifully written!
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Thank you so very much! 🙂
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https://thelighteningandthefire.wordpress.com/2015/02/20/children-of-god/
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i am new here,will you see my first poem and tell me how it feels to you,the name of poem is life,if you like it please leave a comment….
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I will go and have a look again, I didn’t check all of the comments I received and missed this 🙂
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thnk u fr the response..
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🙂 no problem!
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how can someone write so well..loved it..
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Reblogged this on Human Relationships and commented:
If I could…
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Many thank you’s to you! 🙂
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Anytime:)
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🙂
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