Sleep deep
Sleep light
Lucky you
if you
sleep tight
Sleep long
Deep sleep
Eyes closed
yet you
still weep
Eyes open
Brain awake
Each breath breathed
a life
at stake
Eyes closed
Brain aches
It seems
like an hour
each second takes
Tweaked bedclothes
Twisting dreams
When are you awake?
Never, it seems
Β© Kait King, 2015
This is awesomeee!!! π€©π€©π€©
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ππ₯°πthank you!
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Sleep can be so evasive. Great job.
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Thank you!π
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Amazing Kait keep writing..:)
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Thank you so much ππ
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Beautiful
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Thank you ππ»π
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Sounded like a rap song! Good one!
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π Thank you!ππ»
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So awesome π
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Thank youππ
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I really enjoyed this!
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Thank you Drew! ππ
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Nice work:)
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Thank you!βΊ
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Wow… What poetry… Awesome Kait.
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Thank you! π
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This picture is so beautiful!
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π it is!
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I found the pic so frightening haha. loved the poetry though
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Haha, I meant the picture speaks a lot. It’s one of those pictures where the image depicts your exact state of mind. This picture itself is a paragraph. Though, I would like to correct myself as it’s been 4 years to my comment, this picture is hauntingly beautiful π
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Thank you!ππ»
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love the post!
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Thank you very much! π
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Wow!!
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:D!!
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Brilliant…I’ve posted this on fightorflights
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thank you π glad you like it!
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fantastic! Read every word.
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Thank you! I’m so glad to hear you got to the end lol π
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Beautiful Poem. I absolutely loved it
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Aww thank you so much π
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Reblogged this on Lost Dudeist Astrology.
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this is great! now get some sleep! hah
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π Hahaha!
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Stunning poetry!! And you chose THE perfect image for your words. π
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Thank you! π that’s awesome!
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That image is terrifying!
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No more sleep for you! π lol
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