Life suspended in a web-like hammock
the coffee smell not as nostril-curling as in the past
a homeless man stumbles along wet walks
dragging his sorry arse along the splinter lit street
a reflection a sad life in a hard city,
his city a place where he lost his wife and his job,
a home, his family
where he nearly took his own
when things were darker than ebony
and he had to walk his walk alone
A bunch of aggro school kids
too brash and way too loud
disrespect his foul figure on the skids
he had no room to be proud
He seeks a place that’s dry
it won’t be warm,
he knows a place where he can cry
and his aching tears won’t show
© Kait King, 2015
“a reflection of a sad life in a hard city.” the description here is so evocative.
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Thank you! I love that word! As a writer that is a huge compliment. To stir something in someone is a fleeting opportunity for change or thought or action. Thank you again, very much.🌻💜🙏😊
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Beautiful✨✨✨✨
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Thank you 🌻🙂
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Thank you!🙂🙏
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All those scenes you described in your writing, Kait… That’s life. Have you ever wondered what life means? Why are we here? I can tell you the truth. The meaning of life is the one who created it – God.
God loves you, and God is perfect. Sadly, every person has broken God’s laws. Breaking God’s laws is called sinning, and sin separates you from God. If you sin, you can’t go to heaven when you die because heaven is perfect. Instead, you’ll go to a horrible place called hell.
Because God loves you, he sent his perfect Son, Jesus, to die in your place the worst death anyone has ever died. He took your penalty for sin on himself. Then, three days after he died, he rose again from the grave! He did this so that you can die to sin and live a purpose-filled life, then go to heaven when you die.
To receive forgiveness through Jesus, all you need to do is pray. Admit to God that you have sinned, believe that Jesus died and rose again for you, ask him to come into your heart and forgive you, and commit to following him. If you pray that and truly mean it, then you’ll go to heaven when you die!
If you have any questions about this, please ask. Please think about what I’ve said. I only want to help! I’m praying for you!
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Awesome!
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Thank you 🙂🙏
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True to the core of not knowing where life can lead you… Thought-provoking
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This is it…. We really know nothing of what is held for us…. The all mighty, all powerful, not knowing, vulnerable human being 😉
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Yeah that’s why faith is needed in every situation 😉🤘
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A beautiful word! 💖
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😦 so sad…
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Yeah… it is 😦
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Heart wrenchingly beautiful! Especially the line – ‘ where he nearly took his own.’
And, please do check out my newest poem as well – https://ramexabella.wordpress.com/2015/09/02/validate-me/
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Awww thank you and yes I would love to 🙂
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Thank you! 😀
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Gud read!enjoyed it
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Cheers Chitkala
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I just love your words
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You are too kind 🙂 thank you!
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Reblogged this on William Chasterson.
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Right inspirational
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Thank you 🙂
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awesome!!…Your poems coming from your mind/heart are like bullets firing from machine gun….non-stop…many at a time…gr8!!
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I think it’s always been there – it’s just that finally the universe has planted my butt firmly in front of the computer without a choice! 🙂 I’m not complaining universe…. 😉
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hahhaha!! what an example!!! you are just unbelievable…
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Well thank you very kindly! 🙂
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But from where you got it?,this is my 1st encounter with such a thought…!!Believe me i am going to use that in future for commenting on myself…is there any copyright issue with that? hahaha!!
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hahahaha! 🙂
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Sorry I missed this comment – that is just so awesome for me – that my words have made you think outside of what you already know – that is a massive compliment, thank you 🙂
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Till now,i cant stop myself to imagine that you are standing before me,& commenting that same thought by speech..absolutely i cant express my feelings..you made my day ,,thanks…
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And that in turn has made mine, thank you! Enjoy the rest 🙂
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haha!Actually also i cant stop myself to pronounce your name as”chetkin”, which one of the word from my language…by the way thanks..
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Thank you for all the time you have spent reading and sharing your thoughts on here too- it’s very inspiring and makes me believe I’m on the right track! 🙂
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You are always
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you are too kind 🙂
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