I’m uncomfortably present
awkwardly I’m here
Cleverly you’ve trapped me
by playing on my fear
I don’t want to say yes
but something in me is sparked
and if I don’t say yes
I won’t have a heart
you’ll say to me
You’ll say to me
I don’t really love you
that I’m not really into it
and my love is not true
And yet that twist inside me
coils like a snake
ready to make me feel bad
making me ready to hate
myself
© Kait King, 2015
Powerful poetry
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How sweet… ❤ 🙂
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Thank you 🌻
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This is the reality, and it happens in nowadays relationship.They try to blame us for their mistake . All those dramas and stuffs are making love, lose its meaning. True love is rare nowadays…All they have is temporary feelings…..
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So true! And so sad😔
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Sensing the lack of self love here!
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Self doubt, I guess. Which is absolutely the lack of self love. I just doubted myself for so long. Doubted my worth, my deservedness of better things…my poor choices in relationships reflected that and reinforced my belief for so long. So many people do this to themselves, I just wish I could’ve woken up to it sooner than later!🙏🙂
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Glad that you woke up! I hope more people do!
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Me too! 😁🍻♥️
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A predatory narcissist was he?
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Hah! Hahaha! 😁Yes, I didn’t realise how obvious that was😊
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I didn’t think so obvious – exceptionally written – but revealing. Quite brilliant. Love your style.
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Oh thank you 🙏😊 You’re very kind!
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How amazing is this ❤️
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Thank you 🙂🙏
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Nice BLOG!!! ADD my blog too!!! Kisses ❤ ❤ ❤
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So raw and brutally honest. Love this imagery and what it invokes. Brilliant writing. 🙂
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Thank you! ☺ Yeah, I think imagery is crucial. This picture printed exActLy what I felt 😉
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Reblogged this on Lincoln Life Blog.
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Beautiful❤
Loved it!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Pleasure!✌
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Lovely… Truly adorable..!
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Thank you 🙂
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Intense and beautiful
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Kait, not sure of the pic at first. The words spark emotions as you always manage. The meter’s running, she’s leaving (or he’s leaving) heartbreak behind in the wake. If this doesn’t stir something inside then you’re already dead xoxo
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Haha! Oh you’re lovely Dave, thank you! xoxo
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👍💝💋💝💋
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Love it K2
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🙂 thank you ThePower&TheG 😉
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Amazing!
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Okay. I love it!
❤
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Hahaha! 🙂 thank you!
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that was intense..
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Thanks….I think! 🙂 Long as you’re feeling something, I’m happy lol 🙂
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I felt a bit ashamed to say how I felt 🙂 it was a lovely read, is what I mean!
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Oh love 🙂 I was only being silly – as a writer, if I manage to stir any feeling in a being, I am delighted 🙂 And thank you for your compliment 🙂
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Reblogged this on Kait King.
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🙂
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