There’s an empty
bottle on the table
A lonely shoe
left on the floor
A dress flung on
the back of a chair
A damp towel hangs
on the door
There’s a shadow
in my bed and
I guess that must be me
I am the Invisible Guest
in my house
as far as I can see
I float over to my bed
to see the shadow
tucked in deep
You would never
think I was dead
I look like I’m asleep
No one knows
I’ve gone yet
No one knows
I’ve left
I’m sad to leave
my family
crying and bereft
But there’s a light
shining for me
I’m ready to walk
in to
if there’s everything
I’ve forgotten,
I’ll remember
I loved you.
Kait King β₯οΈ
14th September 2019
Wow your poems are just litπ£π₯π₯π
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Oh thank you! That’s awesome π€ππ»
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It’s really superb analogy with wonderful concept
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Thank you π
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Your welcome π
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Invisible shadow. Nicely crafted π
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Thank you very much!π
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Heartfeltβ₯οΈ
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Thank you πππ»
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Youβre welcome.
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Oh, thank you so much!ππ I just want to help…I hope she left before Covid-19 or she will be trapped with the monster! πππ
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This is beautiful and as an aside, I love what you said to Taslima … X
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Oh, thank you so much ππ I just hope she left soon and is not trapped with him now in lockdown π
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Yes … me too. X
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Sorry about repeat comment, it showed that I hadn’t repliedπππx
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Ha! Iβm always doing that! ππ
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No one will cry for me or miss me if i am gone, except my kids. I am already invisible and unwanted in this world.
I am already visible to my kids
I am only living for my kids
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You are not unwanted. A Monster has told you stories for so long you’ve started to believe them…scrap his poor, harmful words and write a new chapter, no…a new BOOK with your own words!πππ»
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Your words touched my heart… no.. my soul…
I been living in one believe for so long … this is who i became now ….
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No, it’s just been covered up by listening to the monster’s bullshit for so long. The only regret you should have from now on is that you didn’t leave sooner. Plan this, it may take a while to save, plan and prepare…but start with a goal in mind to leave. I told nobody…I just ran away with my baby…the most important thing. And have never looked back…
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I have two kids
Their daycare and school
Plus my job
The schedule dont work
For to take them and pick them up
Idk where to go
How to go
I dont have money
Im stuck with credit card bills
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These things will ALWAYS take priority when the priority needs to be your safety and a life worth living. Start planning…this is your last effort, make it count for you and your kids. Talk to local services, to women who have left in difficult circumstances. But make a step, take a step towards freedom and to showing your kids what life should be. Preparation takes time but take comfort knowing it means escaping this in the end, even if it takes another year but not a day more wasted on treading water and giving up. Fight for your kids and for yourself, you deserve better
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Thank you… u give me hopes
I am working on it now… i started my first step
Talking to everyone i know
Not staying quiet anymore. Taking it one step at a time …. hoping all works out
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It will work out, all of it. Just stay strong and determined. Focus on the end goal which is happiness and freedom for you and your children. All power to you girlfriend! You’re AMAZING!ππππ»π»π»
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Thank you. Thank you very much
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Thank yourself and the Universe…it has a weird way of making things coincide! You have all the work to do now, but I hope you feel empowered and ready to take on the world…it is yours to have, y’know. Go get some, and show your little ones a happy mommy life too. Know I’m an email/WP message away if you need a boost but I’m sure if you talk honestly to family and mean what you say, they will support you. You may have to take a couple of first steps alone to prove to them you’re serious. But they may well sense a change in you now anyway! All the very very best to you and yours ππ₯°
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Thank you
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I love thisπ
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Thank you!ππ
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Do you mind if I asked to know you better ?
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Sure, what would you like to know?
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Tell me about you, what do you write about? Also any advice to improve my prowess in writing?
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Write from the heart. If it means something to you then it will mean something to others. I try to write about what is important to me.
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It varies…nature, animals, human, trust, nowadays philosophy, love is not really my thing.
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Yes I write about whatever strikes a chord in me, it’s great to be able to express myself, including love and it’s failures!π
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I recently got involved with stories
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Short stories? Creating a book?
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Yh….two really…..one is a compendium of poems, the other is a story that involves speeches on philosophy and psychology……after that, I plan on writing a third…..all this year….. PDFs though, not printing
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Awesome! So you like research?
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Thinking π
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