There were just
too many
in this crazy crowd
Crushing in on
me
So I’m unable to
shout out loud
It was just
way too
noisy
in that clamouring
sweaty swarm
Body smells too
pungent
The air I breathe in
is warm
The darkness
has a dampness,
a claustrophobic clamp
The lighting bulbous
and hypnotic –
like a giant lava lamp
A pulse
united in
a passionate beat
And ignoring all
the warning signs,
I’m led by my dancing feet
© Kait King, 2016
The writer's blogk 
Your words really embodied the experience
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Thank you 🙏✨️
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🤡 oh party oh party oh party 🙌
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👣💃
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🤖🙌
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😁
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It put me there in the heart of the beating heat.
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Amazing! I can still feel it although a fairly distant memory 🙂 Just loved getting lost in the music, dance and people 💖
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That’s what happens when you think you got the best dancing step😊
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🤣🤣🤣🙌🤣🤣🤣
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you!🙂🙏🌻
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Gorgeous presentation
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Thanks!
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Can you also do this on my posts via like
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Wow
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😄🙏
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Dance to your own beats 💕
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Absolutely!👍🙏
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Love
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🙂🙏
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Nice!!! Kisses ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thanxxx 😊
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Were you always talented at writing?
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Oh I’ve always written, but I’ve never shown any of my stuff to anyone… Until this WordPress site ☺ thank you for saying I’m talented 😊 I do have poems and short stories that I wrote when I was 12 , hundreds of pieces actually 🤔
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It sounds like your gift was always there then 😊
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Perhaps! 😁
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Lovely poem
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Thank you 🙂
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love each of your article
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Thank you very much 🙂
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🎶
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😀
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Brilliant, you have such a way with words. I can smell the sweat, hear the music and become part of the crowd, magic the sway of bodies and the tightness on the floor. Kait I just love your imagery and the way you transport us. Peace and love xoxo
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And to you! 🙂 Thanks love – so glad you enjoy the ride, I am so grateful for your feedback – I just get boosted along again! 🙂 xoxo
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You are deserving of praise, I wish I had half your talent and wordsmithery (is that even a word?) anyhoo, you fill my days with light and my nights aren’t as dark anymore with you in them. Love and peace to you and everyone you care about who loves you back xoxo
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Oh your wordsmithery is just perfect!
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😍💝💋💞💞💋👌
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🙂
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Ooops! I pressed the wrong button 🙂 …And yes, there is such a word! Thank you so much, you are an inspiration for me as you know – it’s so wonderful knowing the words I write have made a difference to you 🙂 Thank you my beautiful hearted friend xoxo
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Got me blushing again Kait, love always dearest friend xoxo
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i could practically experience it..
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Oh that’s awesome, thanks! 🙂
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Another GREAT poem that pulls you into the sweat and grind of the dance!! Brilliant work. THANKS
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Thank YoUuUu! 🙂
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