
Your’e fading
on me again,
Quietly moving
away
Distancing yourself
So that you think
I won’t notice…
The bed is
our friendly
enemy
Saving us
from ourselves
and each other
It’s a waiting
game as
your brain seasons
change
And you will
be back if
you go
And we go
through
This
… again
Kait King 25/01/2020

The bed is our friendly enemy, saving us from ourselves and each other” is such a striking image, Kait, it captures that painfully specific dynamic of pulling away not because love is gone, but because closeness has become its own kind of danger. And “your brain seasons change” reframes the whole cycle as something almost involuntary, weather more than choice, which makes the waiting feel less like weakness and more like survival. That final fragmented “This… again” lands like exhaustion itself. Raw and honest writing.
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I just want to get lost in you even if the world doesn’t find me.
I don’t mind being called a fool as long as its only you I see..
Hold me in your arms like a tool
I want every sentence to address you and I as we…….
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Beautifully worded, I totally get you… I often ask myself how many times we can cycle through this….
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Oh my dogg, I know…one more try, I don’t want to fail at this relationship, I don’t want to be a statistic….ugh, yeah! And then you get out of it and think “why the hell did I wait so long!” I’m sorry you can relate so well to this😔 And thank you 🙂🌻
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Well thank you 🙏🌻🙂
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your ideas are strangely attractive. i like.
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True well written. Excellent!
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Thank you Naana!🙂🙏🌻
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Your so welcome kait
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Well written!🤞🏼
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Thank you!🙂🙏🌻
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Heart touching. Loved it!👌
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Thank you so much!🙂🙏🌻
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Hauntingly beautiful … Katie
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Great
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Painfully familiar. Great piece!
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I’m sorry about that🌻 And thank you!🙏🙂
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