So very close to me
you look
on my inside
and I think it doesn’t matter
So very close to me
you breathe
on my outside
and I think it doesn’t matter
Then I’m alone
pictures fall in my head
I shut my eyes so tight
and lie lost in my bed
wishing you were here
so very close to me
and I know…
it really doesn’t matter
any more
© Kait King, 2015
The writer's blogk 
Beautifully emotive!
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Thank you so much!🌻🙂
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The words really remind me of Metallica’s Nothing Else Matters. They match perfectly well. Nice job.
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Thank you so much! 💓
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You should better listen to that song too. It’s really awesome
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I have heard that song many times. Beautiful and true🙂🌻
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Cool to see that
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Very nice! Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you!🌻🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you!🙂
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Oh.. dear, suddenly I am feeling and drawning,my boddy is freezed,its so practical and live..
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That’s great to hear as a writer! Thank you😊🙏
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My pleasure have a nice day
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Thank you and you!🙏🌻
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you rock as ususl..
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😊😊😊🙏🌻
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Plse give your valuable feedback on my Thursday poems do or deny and our little son our inspiration have a nice day
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Hi, I tried to read your beautiful poem about your son but a lot of lines are overlapping and can’t be read. I’m not sure but it may be something in your formatting? Best of luck!🙏🙂🌻
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How you pen down so beautifully!!
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Thank you so kindly!🙏🙂
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Beauty seen in your words.. 🙂 I nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award. Please check out the “Mystery Blogger Award.” post on my Site for the instructions. Congratulations 😉 Happy Blogging 🙂
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beautiful…..
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Thanks 😊
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This was beautifully written!
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Thank you very much! ☺
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Once again, my dear Kait, you nailed it. My See Through Mind is full of wonderful poetry as well, how do you manage to blog so prolifically and still have material for a book of poems? Much less 2 amazing books of poetry! Power to you and your pen, love and peace my very dear friend xoxo
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Oh thank you so much Dave! 🙂 Bless your kind heart! I am still waiting on my shipment and hopefully no delays :/…I have sooooo much stuff it is unbelievable even to myself! :)) xoxo
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Love and peace always Kait from me to you xoxo
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xoxo
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yay 🙂 and another 🙂 spot on
Nx
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cheers! 🙂 x
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🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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