The day draws painfully long,
my love
without you in it
The night a torturous silence,
my love
when you are not in my bed
A meal for two,
my love
is now a punch in my gut
and I cannot eat a morsel
thank you,
my love
let me thank you for
a lesson learned
As I never would have believed,
my love
that I would never be
with you
© Kait King, 2017
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Beautiful poem!
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Emotions through words perfectly
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Hey Beautiful Poem gave my the chills.
Please check my recent writes.
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Thank you 🙂🙏 I’ll do my best!
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Fortunately it was a lesson learned and can only make you better in return 🌞
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Really beautiful and this touched me!
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Love this post!! So real!
also i wrote something. Hope you visit my blog and like my post. I’m just starting btw. Thank you =)
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Love this poem!
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You’re welcome, Kate! 😘
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Beautiful post, love is powerful…do visit my blog… hope you will like it…
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Love this poem! So real.
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Check out my page! I write about stuff like this all the time.
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it’s a really wonderful poem bdw i am just starting out and i hope u will like to see my poem too.
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U represent pain beautifully
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Thank you although perhaps I wish it wasn’t so! But amazingly many wonderful people like yourself do relate. Thank you again 🙂🙏
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beautifully expressed….loved it
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I could feel those words.. the pain behind those incredibly powerful words: ‘my love’. Beautifully written!
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Amazing piece.
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I love poetry, and you’re a great poet dear. so much said and felt in this short one.
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L TOO LOVE POETRY AND IM SO INSPIRED
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That is awesome!!!😁🙏
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I too have my own version of fantasy kind of love for my future wife
https://lovmyselfs.wordpress.com/2019/03/29/my-future-wife-be-like/
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It truly hurts when you expect that the one you will stay but later on he leaves like everyone else.
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It does!!
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nice~
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It was nice 😦
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This is nice!
OK, so I kinda share my feelings, thoughts and fantasies on here. Please go to http://www.introvertgirl.home.blog to read and comment. Thank you
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Deep and so beautiful ♥️
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Fantastic one..
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Pain from a heartbreak is hard to maneuver through, but it can bring you to the best places!
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It can! And we’re often wiser and stronger for it 🙂🙏
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Oh my! The pain is so evident in these lines.
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🙏🙂 thank you…I think lol😁
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My pleasure
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Loved this!
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This piece stole my heart!
I’d appreciate any feedback on my first article 🙂
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I didn’t like it
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Awesome usage of words. After read this I got to know that yo we can use words like this as well. Hilarious dear😃
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Hi kait ,
You are the very first person to whom I read blog and that was my love ,as I mentioned earlier it was enchanted.
I have just started write blogs so overall I am novice in this area and I want to brush up my skill. If you don’t mind, could you please help me by check my blogs and make me under stand the area of improvement.
I want to write as impeccable as you writes.could you help me????
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Thank you very kindly! I believe your heart and your pen will determine the writer you are. Keep writing and I will do my best to visit!🙂🙏
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Good
Please check this also
http://mrindia.home.blog/2018/12/22/deal-with-monster_/
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how beautifully words define the pain ……….
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Thank you 🙂🙏
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Separation is inevitable
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Haha! True dat!!😁
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Maybe sometimes different but yes when one thinks all done again to square one lol that’s life
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It sure is 🙂🙏
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Beautifully written!
I write poetry too, please do check out mine.
https://shadowsofrinum.com/2018/10/03/thank-you-for-your-insults/
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Thank you 🙂🙏 will do!
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I loveee!
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I love this poem so much…Do you mind if i share this on my blog? its so good
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Thank you so much 🙂🙏And yes you most definitely can!😊
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Beautiful….
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Bravo
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wow thats exactly how I feel. Great words. Thank you
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Thank you!🙏🙂 You are so very welcome
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Such a touching subject. I absolutely love it.
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It’s painful…but it’s beautiful ..😍😉😊
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My love 😢.
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Touched 😦
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Beautiful poem. The picture speaks for itself. Did you draw that.
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Oh I wish!! Thank you 🙂🙏
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You are a beautiful soul. Life is an Infinite journey, in which we are blessed with infinite Soul mates, each on their Own Journey. The Selflessness of LOVE is realising we constantly GROW…….Every Soul is at a different point in their Journey.
We will always have a strong connection to soul mates with whom we have been intimate, that is the whole reason You were drawn to each other. It is part of our DNA. We are Created to LOVE. To give Love Selflessly, expecting nothing in return. Love opens our hearts and Minds, we are no longer “insecure” in who we are. To Love is to KNOW GOD,You were born to SHINE, SO SHINE…….Have a beautiful Journey
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Blessings to you and your family, you too are a kind soul shining in an often dark place. Thank you for your words and inspiration 🙏🙂
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We are here to “serve” and inspire One another, “by the grace of God go I”
There is ‘Power’ in words, Thank You for Yours, have a blessed and uplifting day
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🙏🙂 and you!
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I love this 🌺🌺
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It’s so romantic
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Nice one. Can you guys check out my work too
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Loved this
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Touchy words ..Keep it up
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Great writing, love your words.
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Poem describing the pain.. good one..
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🙏 thank you Chiru
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Love it!
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Lovely post
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Love is best teacher
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Often times the hardest teacher too!🙂
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Yes you are correct
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Woow wat an amazing piece of work it was
Hope you will like mine too
I have writen this with a lot of passion and put my soul in it please read it once
https://beatyourneed.com/english-poems-love-poems-win-heart/
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Very sweet words she’s a lucky lady 🙂
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we get to learn a lot from love
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Yes! Good and bad 🙏
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Beautiful weave of words!
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Every word beautiful described that torn feeling…
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Beautiful 😊
go through my work,follow and like if you find it captivating ♥
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Thank you🙂 Done!
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Dear how are you doing
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M doing great
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That’s a blessing..
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Lessons learnt good poem
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Thank you, yes, hard ones!!
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Yes really hard
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Amazing read, very deep and full of feelings..
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Thank you 🙏
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I just started blogging.. Would love for you to check out my posts and let me know what you think
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I will do my best to visit soon, but keep writing, dont give up 🙂
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you are lucky girl
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I’m not sure why you say this, but thank you
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Really enjoyed this! I would love, if you had some time, for you to look at my writing and give me some pointers!
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I will try my best 😊, thank you
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Good
Please check this also
http://mrindia.home.blog/2018/12/22/deal-with-monster_/
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This is amazing!
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Thank you very much!
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Great post 😁
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautifully mentioned! Even i have mentoined a poem on love. I’d be glad to know your views. Here’s the link: http://www.thesoultalks10.com/the-tale
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Sure, thank you!
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I know….love hurts 😔
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elegant writing 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Love
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Thank you 🙂
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Nice
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Lovely… So beautiful
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Thank you kindly!🙂
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This is beautiful! I loved it
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Oh thank you so much! 🤗
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Great read! Hey do you mind checking out my page and give my some of your opinions on my entries since we both write poetry. Thanks
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Sure thing, and thanks for commenting ☺
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Wow! Hurt and pain so eloquently expressed
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Sorry you could feel that! 😉🙂
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Okay 😌. Please tell me, why are you so good with words?
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Haha! 😊 Thank you so very kindly! And I have no idea, sorry! 🙂
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In love, there’s always some learning…:'(
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In life…. But that’s the ride!😊
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Hahaha
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Very moving my lovely dearest Kait. I can feel your anguish yet all that we are comes from all that we give. I learned that lesson and have grown because of it. Now comes a time when we are growing closer regardless of the miles and planet between us. I hope we continue to realise how much we need one another and how much we can grow together. Peace, love and a long, prosperous life filled with friends, family and love to you xoxo
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Bless you Dave, you know those wishes are a thousandfold returned with a cherry on top! 😀Here’s to us! 😊xoxo
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Oh wow, I love cherries 🙂 thank you so much xoxo
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Haha! Oh me too!! I don’t like to say they are THE favourite, but damn it’s close! 🙂 xoxo
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Absolutely, too close to call xoxo
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Xoxo
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Hi dear how are you doing how’s your day going so far how’s the weather conditions over there hope you keep safe?
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All is not well in New Zealand atm. So not so good…
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Thanks for the caring dear
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I have enjoyed it very much, I also read one of your posts and commented on it. Where do you live? That question also has a lot of connotations about it, am I asking to be nosy? Or to be friendly, to see if we can meet up for a coffee sometime? Or could it be because I’m not okay with immigrants and asylum seekers coming here. It’s only when we get to learn about others that we learn the truth about ourselves. I love that you are writing only when you have something to say, or get off your chest (I’m the same, I don’t post for the sake of posting something every day). I would like to get to know the inner workings of your mind to see how you really see your place in society, I have always been weird, queer and out of sync with the world which could become apparent if you read just a few of my posts. I have never wanted to conform to societies expectations because I don’t care what others think of me, actually, I do but appear not to. If you understand that then you may well be on my wave length.
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Heyyy! I am from India sir. But I really hope to catch up with you someday. It would be sucha lovely thing.it means a lot for me for you to take your time for this comment. Thank you.
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You are very welcome, and where you are from doesn’t matter, we see things the same way from a humanitarian point of view, no one left behind. For that I thank you too.
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True
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M also from India… Great to see you here 😊
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