Inky black,
I’m sucked back
down to
her darkest depths
Like an octopus
her story wraps me
in its tentacles
A stranglehold
on stories told
and the ink
she has spread across
the page I
can’t see through
I think I’m drowning
It’s sticky black
and I should come up
for air
even though
my mouth
is open
to suck grace in –
nothing fills my lungs
even though
my eyes are open
there is nothing –
nothing but darkness
inky blackness
the colour of
the story told
with the pain of
being buried
alive
© Kait King, 2015

Nice
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Thanks!
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Like an octopus – simile usage is nice kait
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Thank you 🌻
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I love the dark imagry. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you! 🌻🙏
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That’s beautiful
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Thank you!🙂🙏
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❤️❤️
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🙂🙏♥️
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You should ensure that the types, patterns and colours of the sofas blend properly with the color
and patterns about the walls in the room. When buying a good sleeper sofa bed,
one vital factor is its frames. One of them is often a complete sofa, the other will probably be
the 2 seat love chair.
In many styles, you are able to fix the sides in the sofa
at different angles, from horizontal for sleeping, to slightly angled
to read by or watching TV. Changing your old sofa could be
the exact same as therapy of aged plastic covering that’s dangling on your lounge lamp for state,
Five years.
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Dark, deep and stunning imagery again. Yet funny and light as well, xoxo
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Thank you Mr B 🙂 xoxo
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You’re welcome Ms K. Xoxo
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Heave?? Heavy… 🙂 But light at the same time! trying to be helpful! haha!
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lol- I assumed I knew what you meant 😉 and thank you again!
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Nice one. Heave but emotive and interesting.
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Thanks 😉
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More cool stuff, Kait!
“Kuro”, Japanese for black. I don’t know why I’m telling you like. But I really like the word.
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Thank you! 🙂 That is a cool-sounding word – ‘specially if you slightly roll the ‘r’and black is always a good word to know for a writer of murder and darkness, no matter the language, so thank you for sharing! 🙂
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Reblogged this on William Chasterson.
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