When we are
touching skin
when you have
let me in
With a dream-like
essence
I feel your
presence
the heat from
your skin
when you let me in
I know there
are no lies
I can see it
in your blue eyes
I can feel it
from your mouth
I can hear it in
your blazing skin
when you let me in
the goose bumps on
your flesh
and our kiss
can only express
we are so lost
it must be a sin
but only when
you let me in
Ā© Kait King, 2015
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Very beautiful
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Thank you šāØļø
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Nice one.
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šš
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What made u write that
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Hmmm, good question. It was because of an arms’ length relationship. When he forgot to be hard he was very soft, but only when he let his barriers down
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Okay fair enough x
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šš
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Quite good to be honest x
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Haha! Thank you! šš
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A woman after my own heart
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šš
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such a beautiful poem
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Oh thank you š
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š
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Such a lovely emotional poem.
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Thank you so much š
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you are most welcome dear.
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Brilliant – very emotionally
evocative. GREAT magical words again!
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Awww thank you again!āŗ
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BEAUTIFUL
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Thank you š
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Very, very nice.
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Thanks! š
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After a long time, I came here and was hoping to see something inspirational and full of life. I’m glad I found one.
Thank you for the smile!
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Oh my goodness, you are so welcome!! Thanks for letting me know!! š¤āŗ
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Pleasure is all mineš
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LOVE IT!
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Thank You! š
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š cheers!
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nice…
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Thank you! š
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This is top class. Amazing stuff!
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Thank you so much! š
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This is a lovely poem š
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Thank you very much š
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Beautifully put into words! painfully sweet, you gave the words a new definition altogether. I have written a few poems about love. I hope you read them and tell me what you think. My native language is not English but I aim to be better at writing in English.
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Awesome! And thank you – yes I think your English is very good for one for whom it is not native! The grammar is the worst, next to the strange spelling of things š But you do very well!
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This is such a great poem!
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Thank you so much! š
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Please do check out my blog and leave comments so that I can improve! Thank u!
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No prob š
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Nice
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Thank you! š
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I know i Been creeping on your page. But I’m so very interested in your writing. It’s beautiful.
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Thanks so much and you’re more than welcome to be creeping around my page š
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Love the pic as much as the poem, did you mean to use a vampire to give the words an added twist?
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Absolutely – and a love undying is so well represented by that vampire mythology and mystique! š
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So true
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Reblogged this on Michael's Origins and commented:
A poem to good not to share! Author KAIT KING
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Thank you so much Michael! š
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You are welcome, like I said, that was GOOD!
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*blushing* š
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I will rather live in sin than to deny myself….
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And that would be only if you believed it was sinful too, I guess….(me too by the way;))
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Same! lol
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