Time
leapt away
from me…
It left me
behind,
behind some
enemy line…
Time
jumped
like a rabbit
down a dark hole…
skittishly aware
of the scar
on my Soul
© Kait King, 2016
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This is hauntingly beautiful Kait ! your words capture the elusive, almost cruel nature of time, yet there’s such raw honesty in them. That “scar on my Soul” lingers like a shadow, but the very act of writing it down feels like reclaiming a piece of yourself. Poetry as resistance. 💫
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Poetry as resistance! I love it 😊Thank you for your amazing comment 🙏✨️
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I love this, Kait. Time is an interesting construct, and I love when poets play with it. Beautiful. ❤️
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Thank you so much!🙂🙏 Yes, I have a love/hate relationship with it!😁
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You’re most welcome. 🙏😊 Indeed! 😁
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😊🙌
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Its lovely
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Thank you 🌻🙂
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Very Nice
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Thank you 🌻🙂
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welcome
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Woww.. It’s very beautifully written 🌸🌸🤗🌟
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Thank you so much!🙏🙂
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Oh silly Alice!
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Hahaha!😄🌻
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ah! Alice. When time slips away from us in our world. We are left with this fabricated reality. Like in the matrix, how deep does the rabbit hole go?
Excellent poetic feel good. 🙂
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Ahhhh! The never ending question… How long is a piece of string? 🤔😊
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Fantastic!
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Thank you !😊
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Love this because it reminds me of Jefferson Airplane (go ask Alice when she’s 2 feet small). Take care of the little things and let the big things take care of themselves, hope you’re keeping as well as the pain will allow xoxo
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Oh that’s a leap back, Jefferson Airplane! Thanks for the memories 🙂 Take care out there xoxo
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You too Kait xoxo
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Love this! More so because it’s Alice in wonderland theme x
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Awesome! I love that fairy tale too 🙂 x
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Love this…time fleeting and escaping our grasp! So well put as always. GREAT poem! Thanks
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Thank you! And so well interpreted 🙂 Peace,Love and Light to you and yours xoxo
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