Touching many
or touching none,
the joy it brings
just touching one –
with a torrent of words
cleverly writ,
from the coolest phrases
in ancient Sanskrit
or perhaps a scribe in
a guttural foreign word
is the sweetest thing
anybody ever heard
And the English language
with it’s redonkulous rules
where no matter how good you are
it still makes you a fool…
sometimes
Β© Kait King, 2016

This is so good. I love how you build from that opening, touching many or touching none, just that one, and then spiral through all the languages, all the ways words can fail us and save us at once. “Redonkulous” is perfect because it proves your point while making it. English really does make fools of us all, no matter how carefully we craft. But somehow that’s not the tragedy, the tragedy would be not trying. The fact that you can make beauty out of Sanskrit and guttural syllables and ridiculous spelling rules all at once? That’s the actual magic.
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I just love how you get my words so specifically. Your comments are insightful and inspiring. I truly thank you for that!ππβ¨οΈ
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The feelingβs mutual, Kait. Your work has a way of cutting through the noise, itβs honest and fearless, and thatβs rare. You donβt just write words; you write truths that people need to hear. So thank you for putting yourself out there, for taking the risks that make real art. Looking forward to reading what comes next
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Thank you! ππΆπ
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This was so good. The “redonkulous rules” so funny!
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πhaha! Thank you so much!
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Excellent Poem especially about last two lines, that’s really trueππ
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Thank you so much ππ»
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Hahaha! “Redonkulous” is cleverly said!
You are so gifted in this.
Blessings!
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πhaha! Thank you so kindly π»π Blessings to you too π
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.. & ancient chants, Kait, Omm Namah Shivayah πΈπΉπβοΈπβ¨πͺπΉπ€πποΈπ
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Yes, the chanted or sung word too!ππ»π
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The chanting first, then Sanskrit the most ancient writing to record the chanting. Then came Kait ππ·πΈ
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πππ you’re funny!
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No handshake, Just Namaste π
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Namaste ππ»
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Love it!
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Hahaha . You are funny Kait and that’s awesome ππ
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ππhaha! Thank you!!ππ
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An exalted fool is better than no fool at all lol
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Excellent written poem. The connection is kindness to all.
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Thank you, and yes – blessings to you!
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Kindness connected
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One can hope π
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namaste π
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Exactly! π Namaste π
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Wonderfully said. π
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Thank you! π
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“And the English language with itβs redonkulous rules
where no matter how good you are it still makes you a fool
sometimes” – this gave me a hearty laugh (hahaπ ). I said to myself oh, this is so me and English language, the relationship we are in is right and wrong, incorrect and correct, smart and fool.π
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Haha! π I think that might be true for most of us! I’m so glad you enjoyed it and had a laugh – perfect! Makes my heart sing, thank you π
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I’m curious, to what tune does your heart sing? Heheπ no need for thanks, I really enjoy your posts.. and this one is my recent fave..hahaππ
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That’s so cool π Oh my heart sings the song of hope I think π I dunno, it changes I guess lol – a bit of funk, trap, soul, jazz! π xo
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Wow!π that’s awesome, your heart have a great sense of taste if that’s the case..hahaπ xoxoπ
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Aww thanks π you too, seeing as you recognised it! lol π
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