Please don’t pick me
not again
I’m terrified
so frightened I can’t
breathe
It hurts and I can’t
see
through the tears
I don’t know
I’m crying
Universe,
Please stop me
now
before it’s too late
and time
steals you away
from me
too brief
too painful
this I can’t do
Please,
Please Universe
don’t pick me
© Kait King, 2015

Wonderful poem Keith 🌷🤝 This poem captures raw, overwhelming fear and heartache—pleading with the universe to spare the speaker from pain. The repetition and fragmented lines mirror panic and desperation, making the emotion palpable. A haunting cry for relief. 💔
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Thank you so much!✨️🙏💃
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goodd job !
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Thank you!
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Great..
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Thank you!
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Lovely words…
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Thank you 🙂🌻
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Love this poem.
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Thank you!🙂🙏
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Nice!
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Thank you 🙂🙏
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You’re welcome!
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This is so good. Lovin’ it!
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Thanks!🙂🙏
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Painful
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Yes….
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Heart melting!
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Oh thank you! 🙂
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i just wrote a one,i am new here..will you please see my poem..
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sure 🙂 I’d be glad to!
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