You’ve broken my heart
no,
you’ve ripped it apart
and just left it
over there
shoving it in my face
that you don’t care
no,
that you never did
as a woman
a man
or a kid
no….
you never did
© Kait King, 2015
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There is no way the heart breaker would be given a second chance, the moment you see his true self, its all over
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Very true – but sadly so many go back…
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Which they shouldn’t do, find someone better than them, that person cannot be the only one
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Sometimes people are left with very little self-esteem. They’re told that no one else will want them. They are so low, they believe it
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They should at least stay strong and be themselves, life is whole lot better without the person that broke your heart, you can find someone better than him. But at least keep themselves strong
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I totally agree – but words are easy. Actually having to do certain things or be a certain way can seem impossible
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Loved it 🥰
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Thank you!🌻🙂
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That’s very well written!
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🙏🙂thank you!
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So very sad, and simply touching.
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Thank you 🙏🙂🌻
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A person with a broken heart is as dangerous as wounded tiger
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Wow! You must know some scary ladies!😁🙏
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bit of both
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😁👍
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That’s sad.. You expressed it so well kait..
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🙏thank you Chiru!
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Sad but very clear, sharp and simple. So few words that express so much.
Brilliant poem…AGAIN. THANKS for sharing it with us.
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Thank YoU! My pleasure and thanks for commenting 🙂
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Kait, I just want to let you know that I like your comment back to me on Springsong but for some reason I have been unable to like it, or reply there to say it was appreciated xoxo
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It’s doing it to me on this comment – it’s happened before to me…I don’t know why it does that – I think it’s something to do with WP app…?? Thank you tho 🙂 xoxo
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Hm, I take this more as about society.
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Beautiful 🙂
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Yes that’s the ultimate betrayal my dear Kait. I’m sure you’re well rid of someone like that, we should all find someone who cares and treats us right. Good poem, all the same and I send you love and hope for the future.
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Oh hell yes, it doesn’t take long for someone’s true colours to show! Blessings and love to you too Dave, thank you for your awesome words 🙂
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I tell it as I see it, Kait, have a great week xoxo
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Shoot from the hip – love it! 🙂 Take care Dave and thank you 🙂 xoxo
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😀
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